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Re: The Mortal Instruments Trilogy
I loved City of Bones and City of Ashes! I have yet to read City of Glass, but they really are amazing books. It was a entertaining funny, romantic and ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Sixteen
Hey Ash! I'm so glad you're back! Darn, looks like I'm late to do the nit-picks but there really weren't a lot and if you look at everyone else's critiques, ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 2
Hey KJ!! It's good to see you're posting more of this! There was a knock at our front door the following day, around three. Without looking out the window, I ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Absalom, my son
o.O This is what my face looked like when I saw that you posted in Romantic Fiction! Not that I don't think you pull a story about love off, it's ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: when we play together
Hello Han-chan! feel your fingertips on my guitar and my pulse beneath your lips fall into your cotton rainbow love and your hands slide down my hips I love this ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: Britney
Adrian! What do you mean you didn't know you were missed? Pssh! (You better not leave again) xD!!! Okay, I really liked this and I agree with June. This looks ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: Canned Peaches and Paper Sacks
Hey Evi! One year hadn’t taken its toll on Rebecca the way it had on me—her blue eyes still bright, still curious, still looking slightly superior to the rest of ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Gardening
Bonjour Han-chan! Wow, it seems like you're on the roll with Cal's contest. I've only just recently started working on my second piece. But anyways, on to the review. Sorry ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: These little things...
Hey there Junebug! Haven't read anything from you in a while! I rather liked this. I felt that it was the perfect length and though I usually like the more ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: All through the night
Hey Ky! It's been a while! I'm not going to focus on grammar or sentence structure or anything, because everything flowed well and your grammar is always impeccable. Content-wise, I ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Mercy
Hey Mars! First off, I love the title. It sounds better in French, so I'd keep it this way. He was always so kind to me, and only to me, ...
May 23, 2009 -
Re: Truth in the Shadows
Hello there! I don't think I've read anything of yours before, but I'm Angel of Death, but everyone calls me Angel. This is my first review in a very long ...
May 23, 2009 -
Re: Beast
Hey there JayandKay! I like your username, by the way. :wink: Whoa! Ok, I don't think people know who you two are. But style-wise, I could tell when each of ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 1
Hey KJ, It feels good to be reading something new of yours. How've you been? I hope all is well and that my critique will be helpful. Turning, turning, the ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Face Off [1]
Hey Jiggy! Hopefully, this review will be helpful in some way. They were stacking up; dead men on the side. I don't like this sentence and that's only because I ...
May 5, 2009
